Nearly everyone right-minded person in the world wants to be happy and succeed. But everyone understands this definition on his own way. For one person to succeed in life means to buy a car and build a big house, for second - to get respect from his colleagues in the work. But does the feelings (love, sympathy) make any sense here? Let's see.
There are persons in the world, called workaholics. They spend bigger part of their lives trying to get a better social status, become a better specialists in their range. These people should pay more attention on their personal lives, because I think that money and social status are just imitation of success, surely there are things in the world, which are invaluable. These things are love, emotions, strong feelings, etc.
The main component of success is health. No one will be really succeed and happy without it. Person can be rich and provided, but without health he will not be happy, because some illnesses like AIDS, cancer are incurable.
As far as I am concerned, for a while I am giving the pas for studies and sport activities, because at that age I need to achieve a good results in university, and as far as it possible to become a better sportsman. In the future I hope that I will find an interesting highly-paid job, a person to create a family and to fall in love with. I hope that these things will make me feel comprehensively succeed.
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